anyone want to give me some feedback?

[SIFI]

this is a picture i resently drew, and i was wondering if anyone would give me some feedback on what needs to be changed. any help would be cool, u can tell me what u like or dont like about the picture, thanks

[EXEcution]

Body porportions are inadequite around the waist!

[EXEcution]

Do u render ur drawings at all, if i had a scanner i'd show u some of mine!

[SIFI]

Originally posted by DaRkAgent@Oct 29 2003, 06:33 PM
Body porportions are inadequite around the waist!
on which characters?

[PimpDaddy]

I'm no artist for sure si-fi. I do no that line art and sketching is hard to do and get in the correct proportion. The figure on the left's face appears a little bigger than the one on the right. It may need to be a tad smaller seeing he is standing behind the figure on the right. The things on the figure on the lefts' shoulder might need a little touching up too - they grab too much attention. Keep up the good work :thumbs:

[EXEcution]

Originally posted by SIFI+Oct 29 2003, 06:38 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SIFI @ Oct 29 2003, 06:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-DaRkAgent@Oct 29 2003, 06:33 PM
Body porportions are inadequite around the waist&#33;
on which characters? [/b][/quote]
Both actually&#33;
The female fairy looks good though&#33;

[SIFI]

Originally posted by DaRkAgent+Oct 29 2003, 06:43 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (DaRkAgent @ Oct 29 2003, 06:43 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
Originally posted by SIFI@Oct 29 2003, 06:38 PM
<!--QuoteBegin-DaRkAgent@Oct 29 2003, 06:33 PM
Body porportions are inadequite around the waist&#33;
on which characters?
Both actually&#33;
The female fairy looks good though&#33; [/b][/quote]
well i fixed the one on the right&#39;s waist, and im not sure i see how the on left is narrow, because it is covered some by the cape he is wearing

[death maker]

well maybe some shaows to make it look more realistic... maybe some shadeing? and coloring?

[death maker]

but, its a good pic all together :thumbs:

[EXEcution]

Originally posted by death maker@Oct 29 2003, 07:11 PM
well maybe some shaows to make it look more realistic... maybe some shadeing? and coloring?
and spwelling&#33;

[JIMINATOR]

hey, can yall help me too with my painting?

thanks

[Fantum309]

Originally posted by JIMINATOR@Oct 29 2003, 10:12 PM
hey, can yall help me too with my painting?

thanks
Jim, yours needs blood in it&#33; :P

[death maker]

Originally posted by DaRkAgent@Oct 30 2003, 01:01 AM
and spwelling&#33;
shhhhhhhhhhhhhush to you :P me is very BZ

[PimpDaddy]

Originally posted by JIMINATOR@Oct 29 2003, 10:12 PM
hey, can yall help me too with my painting?

thanks
bigger jugs is all I can tell ya

[JIMINATOR]

well, i aim to please....

[OUTLAWS high ping camper]

Someone contact the Police, this thread has been stolen&#33;&#33; :)

[ME BIGGD01]

SIFI, Dark Rellic does alot of drawing and is quite good and uggest you might ask him for some tips. I have seen his work and it is pretty good and think yours is ok but needs alittle work. I think you are young and can only get better at this stuff. I wish I had the talent to draw so I would hope you take advantage of your talents and try to master them. There is alot of money to be made for artists but do it because you like to.


Jim, now that is a work of art. :thumbs:

[Pure_Evil]

Originally posted by JIMINATOR@Oct 29 2003, 11:02 PM
well, i aim to please....
Too bad your aim SUCKS&#33; :cool:

[Death Engineer]

I&#39;m impressed SIFI. I&#39;m no artist, so I wouldn&#39;t dare to try to critique your art (english.....yea...I&#39;m all over that :P). But just don&#39;t stop drawing. The more stuff you draw, the better it will look. Rock on dude. :wootrock: