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LaSH
06-18-2004, 02:37 PM
[QUOTE]Oh and for everyone listening, I beg of you, please run your posts through a spelling and grammar checker. Sometimes I wonder if deciphering the Rosetta Stone was easier for humanity.[QUOTE]from DL




What the hell dude,you some kind of "GRAMMAR SCHOOL TEACHER" now? :rolleyes:

You help run a site that has kids,teenagers,and adults that dont give a f----. How in the world can you try to preach proper grammar? :blink:

What i realy want to know is how you have time to be a teacher. On top of being SALs------------well we all know what you are to SAL. :P



Next thing you know DLs going to be handing out smile faces for students that can spell. :rofl:

EXEcution
06-18-2004, 02:41 PM
my thread is so much better than this one

LaSH
06-18-2004, 02:42 PM
Originally posted by .:EXEcution:.@Jun 18 2004, 02:41 PM
my thread is so much better than this one
LOL, thats what i love about you EXE.

EXEcution
06-18-2004, 02:53 PM
Originally posted by LaSH+Jun 18 2004, 10:42 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (LaSH @ Jun 18 2004, 10:42 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-.:EXEcution:.@Jun 18 2004, 02:41 PM
my thread is so much better than this one
LOL, thats what i love about you EXE. [/b][/quote]
:online2long:

Nitro
06-18-2004, 06:19 PM
^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_ ^_^As children our parents love and adore us ========== If you are speaking
of all children, this is not necessarily true. If you are speaking of
yourself and your peers, then "loved and adored" would be clearer.
>they are there as our leaders and protectors
they teach us only good not bad =================
and blame us when we go wrong. =============== Do you mean "correct us?"
if not, then this line contradicts the first three, and needs more of a
setup.

At that age we are innocent
now as teenagers we are called
destructive and evil. ==================== by whom?

As a child what we asked for we certainly did recieve =
now as teenagers we are said to be =Are you enying the charge or blaming the
spoilt and selfish = parents for the condition?

They protect us until that certain age
thats when they throw us out
into the real world without a life line to help. ======== Are you sure? most parents I&#39;ve known would not.

Then they blame us once more
for the problems we cause
but they were the ones who sent us
flying into this cold harsh world all
alone.

In this harsh world any escape is welcome
>weather pleasure or drugs
as long as it does the trick

That moment of relief, when we feel safe
and in control once more
when everything is like it was
full of love and beauty

No one can understand unless
they themselves have been there
but it doesn&#39;t stop the rest from judging
>and condeming us to sin ==== "for sin"

but little do they know of the beauty and innocence
of this world ========================== Are you referring to a drug-induced high, here?
this new and improved world
a total wonderland
full of new things to discover

but with this escape we realise
our independence and get a grip on life ========== Not through drug-use.
thats if we have made it this far,

Some die on the way not finding an escape
finding death as the only escape
but death isn&#39;t the way out
omly the beggining of pain
because in that world there is no escape
you have to pay for the greatest sin of all,
taking something thats not yours to take,
your life.

Now for the ones that have survived
we begin to distance ourselves
living the life we have choose
and the world we have made
all of a sudden our parents notice
this independence and distance ============ Maybe they&#39;re noticing something else.
and beg us to return
but we are human and remember
the pain we went through to get where we are,
now that were here there is no going back.

we still love them but to distance ourselves is the only way
to find peace within our imagenery minds and vengvile hearts.
Parents sometimes force these teenagers to mature to quickly
denying them there years of irresponsibility and freedom === There is no freedom without responsibility.
buy doing this the parents cause instability and sadness ==== I&#39;ve never
heard of responsibility causing instability. If you&#39;re going to claim
that, you&#39;re going to have to provide more illustration for it.
and these matured individuals
know they have missed out on something

but you can&#39;t return once you&#39;ve accepted the responsibility
because that wild spirit has been chained up
and locked away for life trapped in the loneliness

In life all things come to an end
parents should not deny us what is rightfully ours, ===== What is it to which you feel so entitled?
if they do, we learn to rebell and susceed in our rage

But now we live for the present
making choices to the path that lies before us
life is not a great to do list
unless you make it that way
don&#39;t get trapped in your own fate
its what YOU make it.

EXEcution
06-18-2004, 06:28 PM
thats a long song

Speedsweeper
06-18-2004, 07:00 PM
Originally posted by nitrostatic@Jun 18 2004, 06:19 PM
^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_ ^_^As children our parents love and adore us ========== If you are speaking
of all children, this is not necessarily true. If you are speaking of
yourself and your peers, then "loved and adored" would be clearer.
>they are there as our leaders and protectors
they teach us only good not bad =================
and blame us when we go wrong. =============== Do you mean "correct us?"
if not, then this line contradicts the first three, and needs more of a
setup.

At that age we are innocent
now as teenagers we are called
destructive and evil. ==================== by whom?

As a child what we asked for we certainly did recieve =
now as teenagers we are said to be =Are you enying the charge or blaming the
spoilt and selfish = parents for the condition?

They protect us until that certain age
thats when they throw us out
into the real world without a life line to help. ======== Are you sure? most parents I&#39;ve known would not.

Then they blame us once more
for the problems we cause
but they were the ones who sent us
flying into this cold harsh world all
alone.

In this harsh world any escape is welcome
>weather pleasure or drugs
as long as it does the trick

That moment of relief, when we feel safe
and in control once more
when everything is like it was
full of love and beauty

No one can understand unless
they themselves have been there
but it doesn&#39;t stop the rest from judging
>and condeming us to sin ==== "for sin"

but little do they know of the beauty and innocence
of this world ========================== Are you referring to a drug-induced high, here?
this new and improved world
a total wonderland
full of new things to discover

but with this escape we realise
our independence and get a grip on life ========== Not through drug-use.
thats if we have made it this far,

Some die on the way not finding an escape
finding death as the only escape
but death isn&#39;t the way out
omly the beggining of pain
because in that world there is no escape
you have to pay for the greatest sin of all,
taking something thats not yours to take,
your life.

Now for the ones that have survived
we begin to distance ourselves
living the life we have choose
and the world we have made
all of a sudden our parents notice
this independence and distance ============ Maybe they&#39;re noticing something else.
and beg us to return
but we are human and remember
the pain we went through to get where we are,
now that were here there is no going back.

we still love them but to distance ourselves is the only way
to find peace within our imagenery minds and vengvile hearts.
Parents sometimes force these teenagers to mature to quickly
denying them there years of irresponsibility and freedom === There is no freedom without responsibility.
buy doing this the parents cause instability and sadness ==== I&#39;ve never
heard of responsibility causing instability. If you&#39;re going to claim
that, you&#39;re going to have to provide more illustration for it.
and these matured individuals
know they have missed out on something

but you can&#39;t return once you&#39;ve accepted the responsibility
because that wild spirit has been chained up
and locked away for life trapped in the loneliness

In life all things come to an end
parents should not deny us what is rightfully ours, ===== What is it to which you feel so entitled?
if they do, we learn to rebell and susceed in our rage

But now we live for the present
making choices to the path that lies before us
life is not a great to do list
unless you make it that way
don&#39;t get trapped in your own fate
its what YOU make it.
Where do you get the time nitro?

Good speech though.

Nitro
06-18-2004, 07:02 PM
i havent been this bored in months.
which is why im here :P

Speedsweeper
06-18-2004, 07:03 PM
Nitro, you are the man.

:wootrock:

Nitro
06-18-2004, 07:04 PM
Originally posted by Chris@Jun 18 2004, 02:03 PM
Nitro, you are the man.

:wootrock:
wub

Slice
06-18-2004, 07:13 PM
Someones plate has shifted again.....

EXEcution
06-18-2004, 07:31 PM
Originally posted by Slice@Jun 18 2004, 03:13 PM
Someones plate has shifted again.....
:rofl: :rofl:
Slice always has something nice to say&#33;

LaSH
06-19-2004, 03:38 AM
I see what your tring to do NITRO. Your tring to get a smile face sticker from DL for all the correct spelling in your post.

Nitro
06-19-2004, 04:24 AM
Originally posted by LaSH@Jun 18 2004, 10:38 PM
I see what your tring to do NITRO. Your tring to get a smile face sticker from DL for all the correct spelling in your post.
You know me all to well do thou not?

Ra\/en
06-19-2004, 05:24 AM
Originally posted by LaSH@Jun 18 2004, 08:38 PM
Your tring to get a smile face sticker from DL for all the correct spelling in your post.
"Tring" ==== Trying

LaSH
06-19-2004, 02:20 PM
Originally posted by Ra&#092;/en+Jun 19 2004, 05:24 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Ra&#092;/en @ Jun 19 2004, 05:24 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin-LaSH@Jun 18 2004, 08:38 PM
Your tring to get a smile face sticker from DL for all the correct spelling in your post.
"Tring" ==== Trying [/b][/quote]
Ohhhh, another smarta55 wanting to be a grammar teacher.


Looks like you got some comp DL.




Oh and RAVEN,im sure you will get a sticker for the correction you made.

EXEcution
06-19-2004, 02:54 PM
I think ill go eat a raven now.

LaSH
06-19-2004, 03:21 PM
Originally posted by .:EXEcution:.@Jun 19 2004, 02:54 PM
I think ill go eat a raven now.
LOL,be careful it may give you the sh&#33;ts.

::: DARK PSI :::
06-21-2004, 11:31 AM
Mu hahaha&#33;

But I have noticed one thing, your posts have been a ton better knowing that I am watching&#33;

Ph3Ar my L33T Gr4mM4r Skilz&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;111&#33;&#33;11&#33;&#33;onehundredeleven&#33;&#33;1&#33;

Morpheus
06-21-2004, 12:09 PM
Originally posted by :: DARK LEVIATHAN ::@Jun 21 2004, 07:31 AM
&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;111&#33;&#33;11&#33;&#33;onehundredeleven&#33;&#33;1&#33;
:rofl: ...

:P I don&#39;t even think he was talking to you with the title of his thread... I think he meant to yell at DE. :blink:

:drink: Morph

LaSH
06-21-2004, 01:17 PM
NO, it was meant for DL. And talk about grammar "Ph3Ar my L33T Gr4mM4r Skilz&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;111&#33;&#33;11&#33;&#33;onehundredeleven&#33;&#33;1&#33;" :P

::: DARK PSI :::
06-21-2004, 02:12 PM
I see how you Ph43R&#33;11&#33;

EXEcution
06-21-2004, 02:18 PM
this thread is stupid

::: DARK PSI :::
06-21-2004, 02:20 PM
.. as you are ghey&#33; Carry on&#33;

EXEcution
06-21-2004, 02:31 PM
:huh:
I&#39;m not the one having an affair with SAL....

::: DARK PSI :::
06-21-2004, 02:39 PM
I know, you are his subservient man-bitch. :ghey:

EXEcution
06-21-2004, 04:07 PM
at least i get paid for doingit

JIMINATOR
06-21-2004, 04:41 PM
exe = proud nambla member... :thumbs:

Thundarr
06-21-2004, 04:43 PM
Originally posted by JIMINATOR@Jun 21 2004, 12:41 PM
exe = proud nambla member... :thumbs:
:rofl: Thanks for lightening up a crappy day for me with this thread, guys&#33;&#33;&#33; :thumbs: :wootrock:

::: DARK PSI :::
06-21-2004, 04:52 PM
We aim to please&#33;

EXEcution
06-21-2004, 04:59 PM
OMG JIM HOW DID U KNOW&#33;?&#33;?

Scorch
06-21-2004, 08:49 PM
:rofl:

Ra\/en
06-21-2004, 11:54 PM
:blink: